Unbelievable plot and a tad slow

Would you say that listening to this book was time well-spent? Why or why not?

So, according to this book, its really easy to kidnap the Pope. That premise was hard for me to accept...then add in the sappy tale about the protagonist's childhood and rocky marriage and I was over this book.

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Overused adverbs

Would you try another book from Rick Jones and/or Russ Offenbach?

The author seemed to go from one over "adverbed" and "adjectived" description to the next, dialogue was very stilted and description of fight scenes were no where close to believable. This type of thriller often stretches the imagination but this one went too far.

The narrator fit the text but this will be the last Rick Jones for me for some time.

What do you think your next listen will be?

John Sanford's newest Virgil Flowers mystery.

What three words best describe Russ Offenbach’s performance?

Steady

Did Vatican Knights inspire you to do anything?

NO

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The Pope's special forces

"Vatican Knights" is a very exciting thriller which will grip the reader almost immediately. Rick Jones presents an all to real scenario that would draw the world into a winner-take-all religious war. In it, he introduces the elite special forces team of the world's smallest country - the Vatican.

The Pope, on a visit to the United States, is kidnapped from the mansion of the Governor of Maryland in Annapolis. The entire protection detail is killed, and two bodies from a terrorist group, The Soldiers of Islam, are discovered. The world is in an uproar and the seeds are sowed for a brutal religious war. Sheri Cohen, a Jew and granddaughter of an Auschwitz survivor, is thought to be the best negotiator in the service of the FBI and is placed in charge by the President. Failure is not an option, but with few clues to work with, agent Cohen has little room to maneuver. She wonders why the commandos did so much to hide their identity, yet left two bodies behind when they had the time to remove them. Sheri is working against the clock as demands have been issued by the terrorists and hostages would soon begin to be executed.

Meanwhile, Kimball Hayden is the leader of the special forces unit known as the Vatican Knights. Their existence is top secret, and the mission he is given is straight-forward: bring back the Pope, alive, at all costs. Again, failure is not an option. Kimball must insert himself into the investigation and get Shari to trust him enough to gain the opportunity to complete his mission. But all is not as it appears. There are powerful people who want the rescue to fail, and they will stop at nothing to accomplish their mission.

The main antagonist is someone known as Team Leader. We get a little back-story on him: he was only nine when his family was killed in a suicide bombing in Ramallah, so we glean some of the motivation for his actions. He is ruthless and cruel, and I liked him less with every turn of the page. His obsessions rule his life and his actions, and there is little change as the story continues. He, too, is more than he seems and his true identity is somewhat surprising.

The protagonists are Shari Cohen and Kindall Hayden, and the story is well under way before we are introduced to them. Kimball is not mentioned until chapter 11, and he is an imperfect hero. Having worked as the very best assassin a secret US government organization ever employed, Kimball disappeared on his last mission and was thought to be dead. However, he simply had an attack of conscience and migrated to the Vatican to atone for his sins. He thought his unique skills may be put to good use for the Pope in an effort to even the balance sheet for his soul.

Shari, although mentioned in the prologue, is not brought into the main story until chapter thirteen. She as well is a flawed character, having marital problems that she is unwilling to address. But, like Kimball, she is honest and committed, and these qualities make it easy to like them both. The feelings they develop for each other threaten to undermine their endeavors, and brings out the human side in them. I could not help myself from rooting for their success despite their shortcomings.

I thought the pacing of the book was excellent, starting with a major event and then slowing down as the sides evaluated their options. It slowly builds to an exciting climax, mixing in betrayals and plot twists that help keep the pages turning. The only negative I could find is that Kimball Hayden may have been TOO good. It seems that most of the action protagonists I read about are "the best" at what they do. Kimball is no different in this respect and I will admit to liking the vulnerable side of him shown by Rick Jones.

The narration was excellent, as is the case with most audible titles I have listened to. Russ Offenbach uses distinct voices for the different characters, making it easy to follow the action. His narration added to my enjoyment of the story.

Another thing I liked was that the descriptions of the killings were fairly mild - not over the top blood and gore. There are bound to be killings in this type of novel, but they were handled very delicately so people averse to graphic details will not be offended. Also, the language was pretty mild for a novel of this genre. I heartily recommend this book to anyone who enjoys action and suspense, and especially for those who don't appreciate the seedier details.

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Story line OK but narration iffy

What did you like best about Vatican Knights? What did you like least?

I like idea of the plot. White House & Vatican in the same book could be very interesting. And it was OK. The writing seemed over dramatic to me. Much of additions did not enhance the plot.

Who was your favorite character and why?

Sheri Cohen. I love a strong smart woman in a book.

What aspect of Russ Offenbach’s performance would you have changed?

His voice was too 'TV news' like for my taste. It lacked the genuine feel.

Do you think Vatican Knights needs a follow-up book? Why or why not?

Only with different narrator.

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Good if you can get past the reader

Enjoyed the story but the reader/performance made it hard to get through. Very monotone.

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mysterious and intriguing

enjoyed this book with all others in the series I would like more of Haden

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A great listen

I enjoyed listening to this story, it has interesting and well written characters, action packed, intriguing and enough twists to keep you guessing. I was impressed with the narration, Russ Offenbach does a wonderful job.

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Pass on this one

This book wasn’t for you, but who do you think might enjoy it more?

A deaf person might enjoy listening to it.

Has Vatican Knights turned you off from other books in this genre?

No

How could the performance have been better?

It would have been better if the narrator was someone else.....

Any additional comments?

You REALLY should listen to the books you put up for people to buy.

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Poorly Written, Poorly Narated

The premise is actually pretty decent.

However, the narrator takes the tone of a lecturer, rather than a character, and the writing is pretty bad - the language to TOO stilted. As another reviewer had said, TOO many adjectives Do people really talk this way in the author's world? They certainly don't talk this way in my experience (Note - I'm over 65 years old, and an attorney, so I've been around and am used to other attorneys using 5 words when 2 would do).... If the author had an editor that required him to pump up his work count, he should get a new editor!

I should have read the reviews prior to ordering and I certainly wish I had listened to this book BEFORE I purchased the next one in the series, Hopefully, us old dogs can learn some new tricks!

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Worst audio book reader.

The story was ok. It was hard to stay with it due to the reader. I will never get an audio book from this reader. I have heard better reading from an NPR Financial report. I would rather listen to the automated message on the phone from my bank than to hear his monotone voice again. I paid for it so I listened to it, but it was painful to continue to hear that reading. Would have liked it better from a computer program.

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