AI author and narrator

This author is clearly actually a computer program. There is no “Zoe Bliss” author. The story has a ton of blaring inconsistencies and it doesn’t really make sense. In the beginning of the story, Jack was new to town and had come from a big city. He met Aaliyah by going on one of her guided hikes. Then they go on a hike together a few days later. Then, Aaliyah is talking to her roommates about whether to date Jack or not. Suddenly, it seems like the next time she sees Jack, he is offered a job in L.A. so they decide to have a long distance relationship. There are references to all of the many hikes and times they had spent together. Then after many months he is fired without explanation. So he moves back to Autumn Ridge and they are referring to growing up together there??!! Then it is implied that Jack is living with Aaliyah and they both have to tighten their budgets, but what about her 3 roommates? That doesn’t make any sense… Not to mention the lack of emotional connection expressed in the story. They at least need a human editing these AI written books, so they actually are a consistent story. The AI generated narrator isn’t that bad, but the lack of differentiation between when the male character and female characters are speaking makes it hard to track who’s speaking. Human narrators usually speak in a different tone depending on who’s talking. The whole thing is just a little bizarre…

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