Short but satisfying

I only wish this was longer. I loved the angst and there was a good amount of character development for such a short story

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Quick Listen!

Ok Quick listen. I found the female character to be too whiny and immature for my liking.

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Good story but it's a clean romance

I was hoping for a little more sexual tension and a lot more sex in this, but it is what it is, a clean romance. I was watching the minutes tick away and it was around the last 20 minutes that I started to worry if they were going to get together. It was pretty much a taste of what could have been a great sex scene that faded to black. I just wished for more.

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A romantic short story...

There was no cocky billionaire and left a few unanswered questions. I am giving the story 2/5 because it didnt deliver the cocky billionaire it promised. and because it felt incomplete without Paul's point of view to answer the unanswered questions he left in the air.


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Yes paul was a billionaire but he wasn't cocky at all. he was just mean to her because she never called him in 6 years after breaking his heart. thats not cocky that is simply bitter. the author missed the mark of cocky for lack understanding of what that word means or she just wanted to capitalize on the cocky trope to get readers like me. I say the latter more than the former since as a writer she has a firm grasp of words.


The story needs a lot more work and character development. the FMC went from hating his guts to all of sudden yes i love him but i am too scared to say it after he says he wants me and loves me. it was such an unrealistic flip that i doubt it the entire time.

also paul sees all this greatness in a crappy person? I don't get why he is so in love with someone who hates him to much. wish the author could have shown his pov and developed the story to show us what he sees.

Really they are both crappy for what they did to their grieving father by abandoning him at the repass with the MMC girlfriend to hook up. It could have waited until after service when dad is dealing with swarms of people wanting to comfort him. It pretty intense to deal on your own when you are too broken up to even plan the funeral. Okay so they hooked up during the repass at least hurry back after you get off.

It cut off before we see the gf again but i hope she skinned them alive lol.

the narrator didnt do a bad job but why have a male do a book 100% from a female mc in first person? I had a heard time remembering it wasnt dual pov i kept thinking its paul speaking and then i was like oh yeah it the girl. only the girl. Its hard connecting to a female character when the voice is a man. narrator is not bad just not a good choice for this book.

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good book

well this is my first book from this author and I loved the book and narrator's voice and can't wait for more.

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It had promise...

The story and the characters had promise, but there was no depth. I didn't care enough about either of them. There was no angst or real passion.
Narration (which may party be the fault of the writing) was choppy and void of emotion.

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